Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Something different.. (2)


No, "Something different" is not the new story. 
Its a series of random poems I'm gonna post because I feel like it.
I would love to get more of your feedback about it!


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"You look good." the words slip out of his mouth.
But I desperately wish the voice was yours.


His strong scent makes me dizzy.
But if it was yours, I wouldn't mind at all.


His loud laugh attracts attention.
But if it was yours, I'd be laughing with you.


His hair looks messy, like he doesn't even take the time.
But if it was yours, I'd think it looks appealing.


He tells jokes that I've heard before, I giggle.
But if it was you telling me the same jokes, I'd laugh like I heard something new.


I notice how his socks match the color of his shoes, and it looks ridiculous.
But if it was you, I'd be impressed by the color collection of your socks.


He reads me news I don't care about it.
But if it was you, I'd find them thought-provoking.


He smiles at me a lot.
But if it was you, I'd find mesmerizing ever single time.


His clothing looks too conventional.
But if it was you, you'd make them look exquisite.


He tells me has had a pleasant time and would like to do it again.
But I secretly wish I'd do it with you.

4 comments:

  1. Wow.. just wow.
    lets keep it to that.
    wow.
    -F

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  2. Keep it going!! But please post the next chapter,I'm so curious to know what's going to happen!

    Farah♥

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  3. One of the best blogs out there. You're so talented and let me tell you this, I KNOW SO MANY SILENT READERS WHO ARE OBSESSED WITH YOUR BLOG!! This is the first time I comment too but I wanted to let you know how much I love everything you write :)

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