Thursday, January 31, 2013
Something different.. (3)
This is something a bit up close and personal.
Tell me if you can relate to this...
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Take a look at me, and I bet you I'll be smiling.
Conversate with me, and I bet you I'll make you snicker.
Take a walk with me, and I bet you I'll be impressive.
Open up to me, and I bet you I'll be very sympathetic.
Tell me you need me, and I bet you I'll always be there.
Share your dreams with me, and I bet you I'll support you no matter what.
Love me, and I bet you I'll be nothing but loving in return.
And I promise you, my friend, I will do all that is in my power for you to not feel the way I do.
Because as happy as I may seem to be, that does not repudiate the pain.
And that late at night, when I am alone,
surrounded by nothing but the walls,
and the loneliness decides to crawl back in,
It drags all the pain with it.
The pain of being mistreated.
And the hurt of being lied to.
And the ache of a broken heart.
The agony of being left behind.
But most of all, the anguish of being unacknowledged.
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I know I've been posting a lot of stuff like these instead of continuing the story, but I'm just not inspired to continue it, yet.
Tell me what you think?
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As much as i really want to know what happens next in the story I still really adore your poems and wouldn't mind reading more of these. Oh and i definetely can relate to this.
ReplyDeleteIt's like I'm finding out what is actually deep inside my head. This is really amazing, please, do continue. I'd love to read more of these. Xx
ReplyDeleteI do relate to it so much, I actually feel the same exact way. I love it how you can write my feelings down, I just don't know how you can describe my feelings in that way. I loved this post, and I'm looking forward to read more of these, hopefully you post a new chapter of the story soon cause I'm hooked. Keep the great work going on <3
ReplyDeleteLots of Love;
M-from UAE aka meem :D
amazing!
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